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I'm only one thousand heartbeats from an explosion
You are the cause and I hope the lasting result
I can't seem to look you in the eye,
it's so terrifying how many sparks ignite just being in your presence
Silent alarms resonate throughout my core,
and I can't tell if it's a warning
this could be my biggest mistake or my greatest escape
I wonder where this will lead
I'm already in too deep.
©2007-2009 ~cries-of-the-past
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I just can't seem to write at all lately,
it's too honest :/
this isn't very good, but if i didn't write something about it I would go crazy.

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:iconlady-xella:
I like it! I think its good.

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That's the thing with magic. You've got to know it's still here, all around us, or it just stays invisible for you -Charles de Lint
:iconvirgokitten:
Sometimes honest is good, though!

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“This is the way the world ends,
not with a bang but a whimper"
--The Hollow Men, T. S. Eliot.
:iconcries-of-the-past:
It is, but so so scary!
haha :)

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:iconcries-of-the-past:
:heart: thank you!

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:iconlady-xella:
your welcome!

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That's the thing with magic. You've got to know it's still here, all around us, or it just stays invisible for you -Charles de Lint
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One thing I really like about your poetry is you always seem to outline opposites, such as "You are the cause and I hope the lasting result
". I think it's always a really neat comparison and you do it really well. =)
:iconcries-of-the-past:
:D thank you! I love little things like that, it always seems to balance out.

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:iconmylifeonstandby:
the truth can't hurt anyone
i think you could add on to it
possibly paint a scene of him with words of hesitence
:iconcries-of-the-past:
this truth can't hurt many people, I don't think, but truth can hurt people pretty badly sometimes.
Okay, thank you for the advice, I'll see what I can do.

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