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I'm spent and
sitting. broke and bleeding.

within my memories,
your hands are
caught.


I can't forget
what time forgot.
am I here yet?
have I lost?
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:icondanemark:
Danemark Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2008  Student Traditional Artist
Wonderful as always.
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theromantiquedead Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2008
those last two lines - sheer perfection, i swear. depressing, but sweet. and a very realistic feeling.
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:iconcries-of-the-past:
cries-of-the-past Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2008
thanks
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:icontoume:
Toume Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
i think the world is falling down around us
and it's hard for us to just
sit by and let it happen.

i can't forget either.
:heart:
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:iconlnin9:
LNIN9 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2008
flow is spectacular, luvely rythem...
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:iconcries-of-the-past:
cries-of-the-past Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2008
thank you
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:iconpardonm3:
pardonM3 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2008
You always have the most beautiful endings, y'know.
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:iconcries-of-the-past:
cries-of-the-past Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2008
You have a heart of gold.
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:iconpardonm3:
pardonM3 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2008
:hug:
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:iconplayacardzright:
playacardzright Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2008
:wow:
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