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Silence by ~cries-of-the-past:iconcries-of-the-past:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Other Romance > Haiku & Eastern


I love quiet days
when I manage to forget
everything but you


then discordant sound
ruins my concentration
much like your whisper.
©2007-2009 ~cries-of-the-past
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parts one and two.

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~StaticKarla Oct 25, 2007, 2:16:01 PM
it has a sense of fanciness to it; i don't know why though lol ;P lovely writing.

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What if there is no hell? Or what if they don't want us there? -Lestat.
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~cries-of-the-past Oct 25, 2007, 3:13:05 PM
haha, that's interesting
thank you :D

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=Flermigan Oct 25, 2007, 4:17:41 PM
ooooooo i like it...the last line is amazing :heart:

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Don't think cause I understand, I care.
Don't think cause I'm talkin, we're friends.
:iconstatickarla:
~StaticKarla Oct 25, 2007, 4:50:35 PM
yer very welcome =)

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What if there is no hell? Or what if they don't want us there? -Lestat.
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~cries-of-the-past Oct 25, 2007, 4:57:16 PM
Thank you!

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~unflinching Oct 25, 2007, 10:34:09 PM
I loveeee it
Your hauikus are my favorite of all time
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~cries-of-the-past Oct 26, 2007, 7:54:06 AM
:heart: thank you!

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~Danemark Apr 13, 2008, 5:28:23 PM
They're both adorable, but I like the first one better.
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